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 What makes Mary Lewis singular is that she understands the shame

that her sons experience and the various kinds of guilt that white men bring to her bed

 

 

A Response to

Black Mama, White Son

By Lewis Lawson

 

Dear Rudy,

I just finished reading your "Mary Lewis" piece. It's remarkable. You get inside that woman's head and do a fine job of showing how her relationship with each of her sons depends on that son's strength or weakness.

I know you've read  Faulkner's As I Lay Dying , but I doubt that you were using it as a model, for I think you were driven not by a literary text but by your memories.

Anyway, Mary Lewis reminds me so much of Addie Bundren, who also was driven by her own passion to experience her life to the fullest, then had to experience the consequences of her passion in her children (only five of then, though).

Rudy, you've got a great novel in you, and the seed of it is in the story of Mary Lewis.

At the risk of generalizing and vastly simplifying the unconquered--and perhaps never to be conquered--American tragedy. I think that collectively the American whites (particularly the Southern tribe) have a core personality of guilt, experience a sick soul for something they did. maybe that's why so many seek a fundamentalist religion that stresses forgiveness. maybe that's why so many others, despairing of forgiveness, decide, like Flannery O'Connor's Misfit, to seek even greater guilt in violence.

On the other hand. collectively, Blacks must have a core personality of shame, for which there is no forgiveness, too often only some kind of defense (denial, grandiosity, rage [against whites, which is understandable, but also against Blacks, which is not understandable, unless they're seeing their own image when they look at another Black and instinctively want to shatter that mirror].

What makes Mary Lewis singular is that she understands the shame that her sons experience and the various kinds of guilt that white men bring to her bed. For we usually only think of temptation after we experience guilt, then look for something that will excuse our guilty behavior. So her white lovers, born with guilt, are programmed to go looking for temptation or provocation, be it ordinary sexuality embodied in the Black woman or some kind of perverse sexuality of pain of death embodied in the Black man.

Through it all, Mary Lewis is trying to assert her freedom, which most of us think can be asserted by seeking total freedom of our body--few people ever take on the challenge of having a free mind.

When you do the novel, you'll have to show that Mary Lewis intuitively understands the various motives that bring white men to her bed and you'll have to personalize each of them. It'll be complicated, but so is the white man's fascination with the Black woman. Otherwise, you'll just wind up with a collective stereotype, a stick figure (pun intended).

You won't have to make Mary Lewis much more articulate about herself, for she's already reached the point that Ellison's Invisible Man reaches when he says, "I am what I am." The Popeye declaration "I yam what I yam."

For all of this generous, guaranteed-successful direction, advice, and counsel, I ask no fee. When your book becomes a best-seller, I simply request that a small royalty to be paid annually ad infinitum to my heirs and assigns, say 5% of sales on the first hundred thousand copies. We will negotiate a royalty for the book sale tot he movies at the appropriate time.

Congratulations, Lewis

1997

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update 16 June  2008

 

 

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